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Heather B's avatar

I love the pacing of this story! It’s fast, trusting the reader can stay with it.

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Elisabeth Edelman's avatar

So glad you loved it!

Pacing is so tricky, particularly when you're the writer and can no longer see the forest for the trees when editing your own work. Am I being too descriptive and slow, or going too fast and losing my reader?

Thank you for reading!!

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