Syntax was excellent—-I liked the descriptive longer flowing sentences followed by shorter sentences that added emphasis. In the beginning I could feel myself struggling with the direction of the story and the character, but by the middle I’d lost myself in the reading and the emotions of the main character and wanted to know more. Middle of the story is truly what captivated me, and I feel that was my favorite part and where it excelled. Very descriptive, painted images and created buy in.
Hi Claire! Thank you for reading - and for your feedback! I also struggle sometimes at first with new books and stories, just trying to get my bearings. Most of the time I settle in - I'm so happy that the middle got you there! Until next week! 🩵
Syntax was excellent—-I liked the descriptive longer flowing sentences followed by shorter sentences that added emphasis. In the beginning I could feel myself struggling with the direction of the story and the character, but by the middle I’d lost myself in the reading and the emotions of the main character and wanted to know more. Middle of the story is truly what captivated me, and I feel that was my favorite part and where it excelled. Very descriptive, painted images and created buy in.
Excited for next week’s story!!!
Hi Claire! Thank you for reading - and for your feedback! I also struggle sometimes at first with new books and stories, just trying to get my bearings. Most of the time I settle in - I'm so happy that the middle got you there! Until next week! 🩵
Beautiful! I felt the emotion and isn't that the point❣️
Love that you felt it! That's 100% the point. Thank you for reading!
Yes, I want to know what happened to the letter!
I love the ambiguity of it!!
Thank you for sharing your story, Elisabeth. And congratulations on starting this substack and getting your writing out there again!
Thank you for being here and for reading!! I hope you continue to enjoy these pieces! 🩵